Thursday, 30 July 2020
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I am a student at Campion College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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ReplyDeleteAlthough the organization of the your slides is acceptable there is not much information on the construction of your Saxophone, thankfully you have embedded slides with materials lists and measurements but you do not have any information regarding why you chose to create a Saxophone in particular or what your inspirations were.
ReplyDeleteSo I would begin with adding an introductory paragraph explaining the choices behind your Saxophone's creation, also converting the blue background into white to make it more readable.
Outside of that the Slide works quite well, however I believe you should embed links containing IMM Documents.
Ultimately your portfolio works quite well, good job.
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